This story is very old and familiar. Book: The Second Sex. Might want to think how to get to what is under the surface. Get to what really motivating the behaviors of each character. A little therapy here. I do like what you are trying to do.
Why did he really walk away and why really did she go after him. The issue of telling me about being a man sounds like a black woman/man discussion. Rarely hear it in white couples, but this is and interracial couple so where is it coming from. Just some ideas. Let me know if it helps any. dedeej
Thanks for participating! Yes, we will be getting deeper and deeper into what is motivating each character as we proceed, excited to know what you think!
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This story is very old and familiar. Book: The Second Sex. Might want to think how to get to what is under the surface. Get to what really motivating the behaviors of each character. A little therapy here. I do like what you are trying to do.
Why did he really walk away and why really did she go after him. The issue of telling me about being a man sounds like a black woman/man discussion. Rarely hear it in white couples, but this is and interracial couple so where is it coming from. Just some ideas. Let me know if it helps any. dedeej
Thanks for participating! Yes, we will be getting deeper and deeper into what is motivating each character as we proceed, excited to know what you think!